Feedback on writing

[Matty_Richo]

Hi all,

I have recently found myself using a lot of my spare time writing short stories. I have always enjoyed writing but only recently have I started doing it with any sort of regularity.

Anyway, I recently sold one of the short stories I wrote to an online magazine and have every intention of writing and selling some more.

I was hoping that the Stick Online community might be able to give me some honest feedback and constructive criticism.

Here is a link to the story I sold to an online magazine and I would appreciate any feedback you have for it!

[Jmac]

I enjoyed it. I don't really have anything critical to say about it, so great job! :)

[Sam|9801]

Well writen.. don't honestly have anything bad to say. Good job :)