Run test (comments please)

[thekolla]

Mehh, my internet went out for around 15 minutes so i made this.
Trying to perfect my run, Can you tell me if you think this is good, and if not how i can improve it. Thanks

http://www.truploader.com/view/516179

[Freeforall]

That actually looks really good! Nice work! ^^

[thekolla]

Thanks man, i'm planning to make a fight scene based on s.o, will probably do it after school tomorrow. i might start tonight though

[ARTgames]

It looks good but the head leaning foreword looks a bit odd to me.

[Ceroblitz]

Too stiff, the legs can swing way further than that, and there's basically no force propelling the walk. If your head was to be leaning like that, your body would be leaning a bit more, and your stride would need to increase if you wanted to speed up. Not to mention, the helmet is incorrectly put on, as well as the start up into the walk is too sudden.

[thekolla]

Damn, harsh criticism. Thanks though, ill work on it more later. I stopped animating with flash for awhile so im pretty rusty atm.