Ok, these are just some sprites i have made. I'm not very good at making sprites and i just starteded so if you don't have anything nice to say... Don't say anything at all. Thanks
Ice sword
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/Icesword.png)
IDK name for this one
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/sdfds.png)
Battle AXE
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/bloclk.png)
Dagger
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/littlesword.png)\
War Hammer
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/Hammer.png)
I'm proud of this one ha ha its my first good sword i have made. IDK a name for it i was thinking like edge or something.
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/edge.png)
Gauntlet
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/gauntlet.png)
Sword i made
(http://i803.photobucket.com/albums/yy313/rootbeer2468/Sosword.jpg)
I will post more later
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
i actually think there ok for a starter man just keep practicing keep up the good work
I actually think they are pretty good. The cheese sword has quite a bit of detail in it, I like that one the most.
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
Like i said....I JUST STARTED... -_-
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:43:29 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
Like i said....I JUST STARTED... -_-
"Constructive criticism" My son.. Although if you redo cheese sword because i sorta like it.
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:46:11 PM
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:43:29 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
Like i said....I JUST STARTED... -_-
"Constructive criticism" My son.. Although if you redo cheese sword because i sorta like it.
What if i made it longer??? and have any ideas on how to make ice sword better?
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:50:40 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:46:11 PM
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:43:29 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
Like i said....I JUST STARTED... -_-
"Constructive criticism" My son.. Although if you redo cheese sword because i sorta like it.
What if i made it longer??? and have any ideas on how to make ice sword better?
Yea for cheese sword because right now it looks like a small dagger but for both of your weapons i wouldn't know, i'm not that big into spriting.
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:53:35 PM
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:50:40 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:46:11 PM
Quote from: aedan on March 14, 2011, 06:43:29 PM
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
Like i said....I JUST STARTED... -_-
"Constructive criticism" My son.. Although if you redo cheese sword because i sorta like it.
What if i made it longer??? and have any ideas on how to make ice sword better?
Yea for cheese sword because right now it looks like a small dagger but for both of your weapons i wouldn't know, i'm not that big into spriting.
Is it better now? I made the long one a sword and the short one a dagger
...!!!!
http://www.stick-online.com/boards/index.php?topic=221.0
Way to steal my sprites man. Really...?
Im curious on who you stole the Ice sword from. Im an active forum member and remember spending time on this sprite.
Requestion Lock from mod. You can't trust the system.
Way to go rootbeer (cheese).
Me and crozier got this fixed its kewl now
They're quite basic, but still good. Try avoiding any kind of gradient-like shading, it makes it look really flat. Also, you have no highlights or shadows and the brightness/darkness shifts (Pointing at the second sword aka "IDK the name for this one") are hardly noticable. Try to also keep the amount of colors you use lower, it'll look much cleaner. Keep it up though, they look quite good, especially for starting out.
Also, don't steal anyones work and claim it as your own, if that was the case here...
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
That doesn't count as any form of criticism, at all. What you're doing is putting him down, rather than giving him helpful suggestions to improve his work in a polite manner. You seriously need to think before you post.
Quote from: Delicious on March 15, 2011, 12:07:38 AM
They're quite basic, but still good. Try avoiding any kind of gradient-like shading, it makes it look really flat. Also, you have no highlights or shadows and the brightness/darkness shifts (Pointing at the second sword aka "IDK the name for this one") are hardly noticable. Try to also keep the amount of colors you use lower, it'll look much cleaner. Keep it up though, they look quite good, especially for starting out.
Also, don't steal anyones work and claim it as your own, if that was the case here...
Quote from: Forum on March 14, 2011, 06:29:13 PM
Constructive criticism? I hated them all >_>..
That doesn't count as any form of criticism, at all. What you're doing is putting him down, rather than giving him helpful suggestions to improve his work in a polite manner. You seriously need to think before you post.
Thanks for the info delicious and me and crozier fixed the problem .... I thought i had made that sprite a long time ago but i forgot that crozier made that for me a while back. It was saved on my hardrive so i thought i created it. Lol we are all good now though
Alright, thought I'd just check up on that. No problem.
Quote from: Delicious on March 15, 2011, 12:43:37 AM
Alright, thought I'd just check up on that. No problem.
could you fix the ice sword i wanna see what you could do with it.
Nice sprites, I like the Edge Blade thing. :D
Haha thanks ;)
Quote from: aedan on March 15, 2011, 12:50:03 AM
Quote from: Delicious on March 15, 2011, 12:43:37 AM
Alright, thought I'd just check up on that. No problem.
could you fix the ice sword i wanna see what you could do with it.
Sorry, but no. I don't have much spare-time to do edits for anyone. The sword is quite generic anyways, don't think I could really add much to it other than fixing up the lines and giving it proper shape with shadow and highlights. It's usually not a good idea to do pixels on such a scale as that when beginning (Even though smaller pixels can be a challenge as well) especially it being a sword, and the 2x black outline is kinda cool however it's really jaggy and inconsistant. The edge sword is decent. You'll definitely improve if you keep at it.
Ok :) thanks!
Nice, but make sure you don't save it as a .JPEG, it ruins the quality.
Quote from: Freeforall on March 17, 2011, 10:17:31 PM
Nice, but make sure you don't save it as a .JPEG, it ruins the quality.
Crap i forgot. oh well :)