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Title: Run test (comments please)
Post by: thekolla on May 10, 2011, 08:30:08 PM
Mehh, my internet went out for around 15 minutes so i made this.
Trying to perfect my run, Can you tell me if you think this is good, and if not how i can improve it. Thanks

http://www.truploader.com/view/516179
Title: Re: Run test (comments please)
Post by: Freeforall on May 10, 2011, 08:39:52 PM
That actually looks really good! Nice work! ^^
Title: Re: Run test (comments please)
Post by: thekolla on May 10, 2011, 09:11:50 PM
Thanks man, i'm planning to make a fight scene based on s.o, will probably do it after school tomorrow. i might start tonight though
Title: Re: Run test (comments please)
Post by: ARTgames on May 10, 2011, 09:27:56 PM
It looks good but the head leaning foreword looks a bit odd to me.
Title: Re: Run test (comments please)
Post by: Ceroblitz on May 10, 2011, 09:55:38 PM
Too stiff, the legs can swing way further than that, and there's basically no force propelling the walk. If your head was to be leaning like that, your body would be leaning a bit more, and your stride would need to increase if you wanted to speed up. Not to mention, the helmet is incorrectly put on, as well as the start up into the walk is too sudden.

Title: Re: Run test (comments please)
Post by: thekolla on May 11, 2011, 02:58:02 PM
Damn, harsh criticism. Thanks though, ill work on it more later. I stopped animating with flash for awhile so im pretty rusty atm.